Chapter 29 Part 2
*I'm change the name "Jarouteku" > "Jaroudeku".
Part 2.
[...in the end, The coalition country of Rokard does not last more than 1 month....]
At capital city of Kshyperuk kingdom, "Dell Van Cool"
Among the royal castle tower in the middle of the city
During it exceptionally vast audience chamber.
A bitterness down figure is on the throne that decorated with a delicate sculpture
The king of this country , "Akatsuki Varo Kshyperuk"
A copy of news that arrived from the west border this early morning, cause a deep wrinkle in his eyebrow.
It content, simply put that "the coalition country of Rokard has fallen"
Since the time of war declaration that Jaroudeku kingdom made,
Kshyperuk kingdom had been tracking it movement,
In the end, The result was settled too fast than they anticipate it.
[Rokard was a coalition of small country after all, even they have a years worth of experience in defense warfare, but....there are clearly different between the nation power compare to Jaroudeku ]
[According to the news, Jaroudeku way of battle is rely on pure brute force. It went ate the whole country from the front with out any strategy.]
[As expect from the major power country, So much of military force in Jaroudeku....]
King Akatsuki listening at the unanimously bandy princes whom gathered during the audience.
2 large renown nations among the west countries,
That is Jaroudeku kingdom and Kshyperuk kingdom
these 2 countries are not necessarily adjacent to each other,
In the mean time,
A small nation group called as Rokard nations was present.
They are sandwiched between the east and west of the 2 major powers,
Almost as it role was treated as a "Buffer Zone" between both countries
Theses countries had been living up like this for long time.
It was an effort that of those small country have,
There was no central government but they keep ask each other in the union to make decision,
Such as give an imitation to check and balance by using the military tension between the two nations,
Quite conducting an clever move.
[In other word, there was something in Jaroudeku. cause them increase force rapidly, burning again with ambition , Something.]
At muttered conclusion of king Akatsuki,
The princes look at each other.
They also think the same thing with out disagree.
Further more,
The fact the puzzle them are not only just that.
Even after they defeated the Rokard Coalition,
There was no report that Jaroudeku Army stop they marching.
Rather,
The news report that they received are the opposite.
[...And after they end war with that small country group, They also continue after our country. no matter how much force that country poss, They are clearly push too much compare to the past.]
Put the coalition country aside,
Kshyperuk kingdom poss the same military strength as Jaroudeku kingdom, they should be a formidable enemy to them.
Even Jaroudeku was a power house too,
It not a opponent that have a power to continuing both war in succession.
It could be said that, the west poss a temporary stability so far.
In other word,
There was something occurred in Jaroudeku kingdom that cause the change to overturn this premise.
Kshyperuk kingdom is in a great peril if it does not know what is that "Something",
That suspicion had come in cross of king Akatsuki mind.
He did not show an timid appearance as the king,
He also had a feeling of crisis that can't be ignore.
[In any case, we can't turn blind away from this since now we were being challenged.]
The king murmur with full determination,
the nobles who gathered in this place also did not display their tension.
the complexion level of kshypreuk kingdom aristocracy are bad among the west countries. (i think "bad" mean "possessive")
Jaroudeku kingdom black knights will come pouring at their territory soon.
[Go assemble our troop in "Shiruda Toraida fort" ASAP. We are going to give those arrogant invader a lesson.]
"Shiruda Toraida Fort" --- the defense line that protect Kshyperuk kingdom western border.
The citadel that ambush Jarouteku army,
It existence guarantee an absolutely protection of Kshyperuk kingdom.
The nobles began to move hastily after they were told a basic solid measure by the king.
(Although, the presence of Shiruda Toraida fort is renown among the west and Jaroudeku should know that as well. up until now, It was a un-penetrate fortress no matter how much number it face. Are they have confidence to overcome it as well...?)
King Akatsuki only think up inside his mind while looking at the state of the nobles.
While having an obscure feeling,
His gaze go see through at a long wall that exist in far west.
Continue on Part 3.
Part 2.
[...in the end, The coalition country of Rokard does not last more than 1 month....]
At capital city of Kshyperuk kingdom, "Dell Van Cool"
Among the royal castle tower in the middle of the city
During it exceptionally vast audience chamber.
A bitterness down figure is on the throne that decorated with a delicate sculpture
The king of this country , "Akatsuki Varo Kshyperuk"
A copy of news that arrived from the west border this early morning, cause a deep wrinkle in his eyebrow.
It content, simply put that "the coalition country of Rokard has fallen"
Since the time of war declaration that Jaroudeku kingdom made,
Kshyperuk kingdom had been tracking it movement,
In the end, The result was settled too fast than they anticipate it.
[Rokard was a coalition of small country after all, even they have a years worth of experience in defense warfare, but....there are clearly different between the nation power compare to Jaroudeku ]
[According to the news, Jaroudeku way of battle is rely on pure brute force. It went ate the whole country from the front with out any strategy.]
[As expect from the major power country, So much of military force in Jaroudeku....]
King Akatsuki listening at the unanimously bandy princes whom gathered during the audience.
2 large renown nations among the west countries,
That is Jaroudeku kingdom and Kshyperuk kingdom
these 2 countries are not necessarily adjacent to each other,
In the mean time,
A small nation group called as Rokard nations was present.
They are sandwiched between the east and west of the 2 major powers,
Almost as it role was treated as a "Buffer Zone" between both countries
Theses countries had been living up like this for long time.
It was an effort that of those small country have,
There was no central government but they keep ask each other in the union to make decision,
Such as give an imitation to check and balance by using the military tension between the two nations,
Quite conducting an clever move.
[In other word, there was something in Jaroudeku. cause them increase force rapidly, burning again with ambition , Something.]
At muttered conclusion of king Akatsuki,
The princes look at each other.
They also think the same thing with out disagree.
Further more,
The fact the puzzle them are not only just that.
Even after they defeated the Rokard Coalition,
There was no report that Jaroudeku Army stop they marching.
Rather,
The news report that they received are the opposite.
[...And after they end war with that small country group, They also continue after our country. no matter how much force that country poss, They are clearly push too much compare to the past.]
Put the coalition country aside,
Kshyperuk kingdom poss the same military strength as Jaroudeku kingdom, they should be a formidable enemy to them.
Even Jaroudeku was a power house too,
It not a opponent that have a power to continuing both war in succession.
It could be said that, the west poss a temporary stability so far.
In other word,
There was something occurred in Jaroudeku kingdom that cause the change to overturn this premise.
Kshyperuk kingdom is in a great peril if it does not know what is that "Something",
That suspicion had come in cross of king Akatsuki mind.
He did not show an timid appearance as the king,
He also had a feeling of crisis that can't be ignore.
[In any case, we can't turn blind away from this since now we were being challenged.]
The king murmur with full determination,
the nobles who gathered in this place also did not display their tension.
the complexion level of kshypreuk kingdom aristocracy are bad among the west countries. (i think "bad" mean "possessive")
Jaroudeku kingdom black knights will come pouring at their territory soon.
[Go assemble our troop in "Shiruda Toraida fort" ASAP. We are going to give those arrogant invader a lesson.]
"Shiruda Toraida Fort" --- the defense line that protect Kshyperuk kingdom western border.
The citadel that ambush Jarouteku army,
It existence guarantee an absolutely protection of Kshyperuk kingdom.
The nobles began to move hastily after they were told a basic solid measure by the king.
(Although, the presence of Shiruda Toraida fort is renown among the west and Jaroudeku should know that as well. up until now, It was a un-penetrate fortress no matter how much number it face. Are they have confidence to overcome it as well...?)
King Akatsuki only think up inside his mind while looking at the state of the nobles.
While having an obscure feeling,
His gaze go see through at a long wall that exist in far west.
Continue on Part 3.
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ReplyDeleteThanks for the translation. You really should find an editor.
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The giant knights wearing a whole body armor that clad in black--- a silhouette knights.
->since it's a group of more than one remove the 'a' in "a silhouhette knights"
All surrounding are become quiet as it died out.
->The surrounding becomes quiet as it died out.
By gaze at the black knight that was solidified as a statue,
The young man nodded with satisfaction, he begin to speak in calm tone.
->Gazing at the black knight that was solidified as a statue,
The young man nodded with satisfaction, then begin to speak in calm tone.
[As you gentleman knew that our country father, His majesty Bartolomeu had fallen in sickness. In the past when our father is near death door, our land was divided by the despicable rebel. Our biggest task for aim is always to regain it back. Just how much regret that our father has embraced? it was unbearable!, We must not abandon that aspiration and inherit it!]
Soldiers of black iron knight are being revive from statue state and stamping it shield to their feet.
->Soldiers of black iron knight revives from their statue state and stamping their shield to their feet.
their lord word.->their lord's word.
During it exceptionally vast audience chamber.
->Inside an exceptionally vast audience chamber.
is on the throne->is sitting on the throne
it movement->it's movement
The result was settled too fast than they anticipate it.
->The result was settled much faster than they had anticipated.
even they have a years worth of experience in defense warfare, but....there are clearly different between the nation power compare to Jaroudeku
->even if they have a years worth of experience in defense warfare, but....there are clearly difference between the nation power compared to Jaroudeku
Jaroudeku way of battle->Jaroudeku's way of battle
The fact the puzzle them are not only just that.
->The fact that puzzled them are not only just that.
no matter how much force that country poss, They are clearly push too much compare to the past
-> poss->possess, push->pushing, compare->compared
Kshyperuk kingdom poss->possess
Even Jaroudeku was a power house too,
->Even if.....
It not a opponent that have a power to continuing both war in succession.
->It's not an opponent.....
It could be said that, the west poss a temporary stability so far.
->poss->possess
He also had a feeling of crisis that can't be ignore.
->ignore->ignored
we can't turn blind away-> we can't turn a blind eye
Thank for your suggestion, i will fix it right away!
DeleteThank you for the upload~ It's been awhile and it seems that the community is helping. Since I'm on break I'll be able to spend time to help out as well.
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